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---Whisper to Me---

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Whisper to me, my sweet child
Your voice haunting and melodious
Your breath lingers, soothingly
With Nature's curse upon your face
The scenic beauties endless
Your link pulls the strings of my heart
The cotton touch upon your skin
My dear, you own the world in your hands
The twirling and the falling
Such power you possess
Melts the stones that bear my stress

An angel dwells in the chambers of your heart
Sealing the innocence that glows in your eyes
From you sweetness springs
Love endless and pain forsaken
Eyes bleeds pools of tears
Refreshing the tiny windows to your soul
Dreamily you stare at me through them
Deepening the bond we share

And as your laughter sang harmonies of life, dear child
You whispered to me
lol ok ummm welllzz...for sum reason a motherly vibe thingy popped into my head sumhow....maybe cuz i luv kidz...well especially babiezz lol theyre such adorable n yet wild lil fellaz/galz lol tehehe :giggle: ....well me flyin off the point here :faint: ....
i wrote it in a few minz so the beat or the flow may be off quite a bit...actually i went ova the end part quite a few timez becuz sumthin abt it didnt flow...maybe u'll have betta ideaz on how to make it goood :w00t: ...sooo alll commentz...suggestionzz....input....etc. ..are highly appreciatedd n can only help me.. :D :dance: lol

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thankyy :hug: :hug:
:wave:
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seekingtruth's avatar
:aww: Awww, it's so sweet!