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When you feel like you're plunging for the worst
You can't end the suffering
It hurts in the very depths of your heart
You're losing trust

No one to care
The way you need to be cared
No one to love you
The way you need to be loved
Because you're alone
No one has a clue
But you
The pain
The heart-break
The feeling that you've vanished
And no one can find you
Even if they tried
Because you're invisible
You're gone
And you can't return
Not for you
Not for anyone

Tears keep falling
You're losing control
Everything hurts
Everything kills you
And all through that
You act calm
You hide it as if it's nothing
When in fact, it's everything

Crying seems to be the only way
But it never helps
Nothing does
You find something to please you
Something to numb you
From the broken glass
That cut through your being
And poured the life out of you
Yet still, all you do is cry
The salty liquid mixing with the blood

You try to seek an answer
A way to escape from this hell
But you can't
All around you
You see darkness
A deathly atmosphere
Only for the dead
The dead that's become a part of you

You convince yourself it's nothing
Only dull thoughts
But deep down you know
The truth of it all
You're the living dead
The wandering soul
The lost hope
The uncared for
The unloved
The one called:
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wrote this in a few minutez...so um yea itz pretty raw stuff....kinda in the moment thing....yea u can tell i spend more time workin on the screenshot....the poem is kinda experimental i guess.....wanted to use simple wordz dat give off a deeper meaning....u know? well um plz do comment....i'd really appreciate ur input...suggestionz...wayz i can improve...etc....:)
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squascha's avatar
sad :(( but beautifull